As we speak I'm preparing five of my poems for submission to five small presses. I'm not looking for grand things here no front page of Litterature magazine, just a couple of Semi anual printings. It's be a real confidence boost as well as some motivation to write more, tho any comments on my poetry would SO be appritated more than acceptence. That way i can improve. I took nick's comments kinda hard, harder than i let on but he's not wrong at all. It's the meaningless workd thrown togeth under the pretence of poetry that is causing a great dislike for it. I mean the poem has to have meaning and emotion during creation and after the fact. It has to live on it's own almost and to have a poem like this:
The cow goes moo
afraid of the heat, hiding
in the shadows of the burned down barn

Doesn't exactly do much other than sound more important than it is. I dunno, i still want to push things. Want to play with language more, but as of now I'm not too shure how, i don't have many ideas, i mean Truthful is heading in the right direction but I've got to keep that up. Anyway WISH ME LUCK ^.^